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Any critiques/advice would be appreciated.

It's - it's a scene! With a foreground! And ... not really a background, but baby steps, okay?

If you look at my gallery you'll see that none of my drawings have backgrounds or environments or anything. I really need to change this. I don't think I like the composition, but that wasn't the point of the exercise. (Bad excuses are bad.)

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AHHHHH, STALKER.

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Spaz being over, yes, baby steps. But I do like the color of the ocean.
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There's a fine background, and it's not a bad composition either. The details and textures are clear, and the colors look good together.
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Aw its cute :3 I think I like the jaggedy rocks more than the roundy rocks. The ones lower in the water make more sense roundy (since they get more eroded). Its cool that the figure isn't the focus of the image. The horizon line is beautifully blurred. I would say adding a little bit of more detailedness along the tops of the rocks, and maybe making rocks closer to us have some more detail in small areas would give them more of a focus. Over all I think it was a great experiment :D

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I think it looks a little blurry. Maybe if you made the outlines of the rocks a little harder, and added more detail that would help? The water looks great.

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Oh wow, lovely background piece! I really enjoyed the look of the ocean and the horizon the best. :D

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LOL, it looks really good!

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More detail then, I will add that to my list of things to work on. :3 I wonder if the figure makes everything else look blurrier in comparison?

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